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Plastic bags plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What time is does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals To solve this problem?

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #time #governments #individuals
Yes
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plastic
 items
such
bags
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as bags
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,bottles and packaging
such
 as day to day life it
cause
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causes
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 the problem to
enviroments
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environments
environment
. It is serious problem that
affact
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affect
affects
 the natural
resoures
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resources
. In
this
essay
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 we will elaborate
how
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on how
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 to solve
this
 by
individual
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individuals
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 and
aslo
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also
authorites
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authorities
.
Firstly
 we discuss the impact on the
enviroment
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environment
by
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plastic
. In recent years all the supermarkets ,food courts and food beverages companies are most
use
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the
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plastic
 bags and bottles to pack the items and delivered
to
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them to
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 the customers.
In
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this
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a
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result
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peoples
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people
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 are
traveling
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travelling
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 to
urban
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the urban
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area
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areas
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 or
any where
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 they
use
 the products and simply throw
in
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them in
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 the forest or
at
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on
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the road
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road side
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roadside
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recent
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a recent
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survey
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surveys
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the
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plastic
 takes 200 years to decompose. It will affect the wild animals and soils are easily
contaminted
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contaminated
.
its
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It's
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 cause the
naturals
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natural
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resourses
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resources
 and some wild animals
eat
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to eat
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the
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plastic
 and
this
affect
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affects
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 the health of animals.
Secondly
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, on the other hand,
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on the other hand
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individuals have some
responsilble
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responsible
 to
use
of
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plastic
 and
dispose
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ofdispose
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 in the
propers
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proper
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 bins and
also
 try to avoid
the
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plastic
. Try to
use
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inbehalf
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in behalf
behalf
 of it.
Goverment
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Government
 need to
came
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come
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 by
the
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seroius
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serious
 action to control the
use
 of
plastic
 as well.
For
instance
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 they need to
banned
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ban
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the
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plastic
by
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in
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upcoming
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the upcoming
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 years. authorities need to take some awareness programs and explain
what
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are
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
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 of
plastic
in
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on
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 television. They need to encourage the companies
try
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to try
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not
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tonot
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use
its
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it
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 and find
the
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others
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other
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 ways. and give some tax
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benefits
benifts
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benefits
 In my
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conclusion
conculsion
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 each and every person need to take responsible for
minimise
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minimizing
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 the
plastic
. to save the
enviroments
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environment
environmental
disasters
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from disasters
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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