The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates the process involved in recycling
aluminium
cans
. The process mainly consists of 7 steps starting from the collection of used
cans
to the production of recycled
cans
.
Firstly
, the used
cans
which are
disposed
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in recycling bins are collected by the allocated waste collection units in big trucks.
Then
, these collected
cans
are taken to factories cleaned and
then
the recyclable products are sorted there,
subsequently
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these
cans
are shredded and compressed. Following these
cans
are heated at high temperatures and melted down as
aluminium
. Later, the melted
aluminium
is rolled into metallic sheets which are of 2.5mm to 6mm thickness.
Consequently
, these rolled
aluminium
sheets are used to prepare recycled
aluminium
cans
in factories. These
aluminium
cans
are
then
reused in the market for selling products. In the United States, 74 per cent of the
aluminium
cans
used in production are recycled
cans
.
This
cycle repeats and the wastage of
aluminium
cans
is reduced.
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