The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates the process involved in recycling
aluminium
cans
.
The process mainly consists of 7 steps starting from the collection of used cans
to the production of recycled cans
.
Firstly
, the used cans
which are disposed
in recycling bins are collected by the allocated waste collection units in big trucks. Add the preposition
ofdisposed
Then
, these collected cans
are taken to factories cleaned and then
the recyclable products are sorted there,subsequently
these Add a comma
,subsequently
cans
are shredded and compressed. Following these cans
are heated at high temperatures and melted down as aluminium
. Later, the melted aluminium
is rolled into metallic sheets which are of 2.5mm to 6mm thickness.
Consequently
, these rolled aluminium
sheets are used to prepare recycled aluminium
cans
in factories. These aluminium
cans
are then
reused in the market for selling products. In the United States, 74 per cent of the aluminium
cans
used in production are recycled cans
. This
cycle repeats and the wastage of aluminium
cans
is reduced.Submitted by liyajayas on
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