The three lie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The pie charts illustrate the changes in her annum expenditure by a specific United Kingdom school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Generally, glancing through the three pie charts it is clear to say that, in all the years , personnel's salaries use most of the benefits
while
insurance occupies the least.
In 1981, the total school amount used for teachers' income stood at 40% followed by other workers' salaries being 28%. Linking Words
However
, resources like books , furniture and equipment recorded the same 15 per cent in that exact year. Linking Words
Finally
, the guarantee took only 2% in 1981.
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On the other hand
, total school expenditure for the year 1991 for teachers' salaries increased to 50% Linking Words
while
in 2001, teachers' payments declined slowly to 45%. Linking Words
Also
, other workers' earnings in 1991 reduced steadily to 22% Linking Words
whereas
in 2001 other workers' wages hit a low of 15%. Linking Words
Moreover
, furniture and equipment in 1991 reach a trough of 5% and in 2001 furniture and equipment plunged to 23% in the same year. Linking Words
Last
but not least, resources like books increased gradually to 20% Linking Words
while
in 2001 they decreased dramatically to 9%. Linking Words
In contrast
, allowance on the other side increase a bit in 1991 with 3% Linking Words
while
in 2001 coverage rose to 8%.Linking Words
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