The three lie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

The three lie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The pie charts illustrate the changes in her annum expenditure by a specific United Kingdom school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Generally, glancing through the three pie charts it is clear to say that, in all the years , personnel's salaries use most of the benefits
while
insurance occupies the least. In 1981, the total school amount used for teachers' income stood at 40% followed by other workers' salaries being 28%.
However
, resources like books , furniture and equipment recorded the same 15 per cent in that exact year.
Finally
, the guarantee took only 2% in 1981.
On the other hand
, total school expenditure for the year 1991 for teachers' salaries increased to 50%
while
in 2001, teachers' payments declined slowly to 45%.
Also
, other workers' earnings in 1991 reduced steadily to 22%
whereas
in 2001 other workers' wages hit a low of 15%.
Moreover
, furniture and equipment in 1991 reach a trough of 5% and in 2001 furniture and equipment plunged to 23% in the same year.
Last
but not least, resources like books increased gradually to 20%
while
in 2001 they decreased dramatically to 9%.
In contrast
, allowance on the other side increase a bit in 1991 with 3%
while
in 2001 coverage rose to 8%.
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  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
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  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
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