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*Newspapers are less important nowadays because we have up-to-date access to the news on the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#*newspapers #access #news #internet
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It is argued that newspapers have lost their influence in the modern world because most individuals are convenient to read the
news
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internet
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. I completely agree with the idea that most
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the
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people
are
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like to search
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news
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for news
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 on the
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internet
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 rather than
the
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 newspaper. There are
a
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various
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of
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reasons why I believe
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internet
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 is a useful way to read the
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 . One possible reason is that we can read only that
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 easily which
are
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interested
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for
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 us.
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, if people want to read sports
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then
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 they can directly go to the sports
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 without any struggle.
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, it saves
our
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 time and encourages us to read
a daily
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daily news
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news
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. Another reason is that it saves
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our environment because we have to cut trees which are helped to make
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paper.
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, reading
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internet
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 helps to reduce the
uses
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 of the
papers
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 and makes our environment
eco- friendly
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eco-friendly
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.
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, as it saves our money, we have to purchase newspaper daily which is
waste
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a waste
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our
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 money. Now we do not need to buy it
due to
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internet
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.
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, in Bangalore, people have to buy
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newspapers
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 which is 20 taka and they have to fix 600
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 per month from their income source. In conclusion, considering the factors discussed
about
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. I believe
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internet
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 is
the
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 breathtaking way to read the
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 which will mitigate the reading of paper base
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 and keeps our earth safe, modern and easier
also
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