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Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree.

#people #children #parent #responsibility #behaviour
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Misbehaviour of
youngsters
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 is becoming a concern in the present time and some sets of individuals believe
parents
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 are accountable for
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 negative attitude
of
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children
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. I certainly agree with the notion.
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conculsion
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conclusion
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To begin
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 with,
Parents
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 are the first teacher of
youngsters
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.
This
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 means, they are the mode of learning for young ones and what
atticates
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activates
attics
 are to be given to the
children
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 depends upon
parents
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 itself. Even if a child grasp negativity from other
children
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 and behave adversely, it is the responsibility of guardians to monitor and safeguard their
children
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 from
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such
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 companion.
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, my elder sister avoids my nephew to play or interact with some of his mates who often use abusive slang
while
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 playing.
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,
parents
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 must be accountable for their child's misbehaviour and must take necessary actions to resolve
this
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 issue.
Furthermore
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,
children
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 learn from their
parents
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. It means, if
parents
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 do not converse respectfully with each other and show mannerless behaviour, the
children
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 are most likely to be inculcated with the same.
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, they become
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.
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,
youngsters
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 being exposed to
a
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apply
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frequent domestic violence often behave aggressively with others and do not
hasitate
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hesitate
 in indulging themselves in physical disputes.
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, in
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cases
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,cases
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 a child's nature and behaviour
is
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are
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 indeed a consequence of their
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parents
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parent's
parents'
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 behaviour
with
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toward
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 each other. In conclusion, It is indeed
a
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the
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responsbility
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responsibility
 of guardians to provide a
mannerful
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masterful
 environment
to
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for
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 their
youngones
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young ones
 and
procect
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protect
 them from negativity as both are the primary factors of
negative
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the negative
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 attitude of
youngsters
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.
Hence
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,
Parents
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 are indeed responsible for
thier
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their
children
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's bad
behavior
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behaviour
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upbringing
  • environment
  • instilling
  • moral values
  • discipline
  • influence
  • negate
  • individuality
  • act out
  • external factors
  • peer influence
  • broader societal issues
  • solely
  • community
  • social institutions
  • overly accountable
  • stress
  • unfair blame
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