Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree.
Misbehaviour of
youngsters
is becoming a concern in the present time and some sets of individuals believe parents
are accountable for this
negative attitude of
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toward
children
. I certainly agree with the notion. This
essay will discuss the reasons for my agreement followed by a brief conculsion
.
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conclusion
To begin
with, Parents
are the first teacher of youngsters
. This
means, they are the mode of learning for young ones and what atticates
are to be given to the Correct your spelling
activates
attics
children
depends upon parents
itself. Even if a child grasp negativity from other children
and behave adversely, it is the responsibility of guardians to monitor and safeguard their children
from such
companion. Add an article
a such
the such
For instance
, my elder sister avoids my nephew to play or interact with some of his mates who often use abusive slang while
playing. Hence
, parents
must be accountable for their child's misbehaviour and must take necessary actions to resolve this
issue.
Furthermore
, children
learn from their parents
. It means, if parents
do not converse respectfully with each other and show mannerless behaviour, the children
are most likely to be inculcated with the same. Consequently
, they become short tampered
. Add a hyphen
short-tampered
For instance
, youngsters
being exposed to a
frequent domestic violence often behave aggressively with others and do not Remove the article
apply
hasitate
in indulging themselves in physical disputes. Correct your spelling
hesitate
Hence
, in certainly
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certain
cases
a child's nature and behaviour Add a comma
,cases
is
indeed a consequence of their Correct subject-verb agreement
are
parents
behaviour Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
with
each other.
In conclusion, It is indeed Change preposition
toward
a
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the
responsbility
of guardians to provide a Correct your spelling
responsibility
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masterful
to
their Change preposition
for
youngones
and Correct your spelling
young ones
procect
them from negativity as both are the primary factors of Correct your spelling
protect
negative
attitude of Add an article
the negative
youngsters
. Hence
, Parents
are indeed responsible for thier
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their
children
's bad behavior
.Change the spelling
behaviour
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