Some people argue that if children behave badly they parent should accept responsibility for the behaviour of children. Do you agree or disagree.

Misbehaviour of
youngsters
is becoming a concern in the present time and some sets of individuals believe
parents
are accountable for
this
negative attitude
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children
. I certainly agree with the notion.
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conclusion
.
To begin
with,
Parents
are the first teacher of
youngsters
.
This
means, they are the mode of learning for young ones and what
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activates
attics
are to be given to the
children
depends upon
parents
itself. Even if a child grasp negativity from other
children
and behave adversely, it is the responsibility of guardians to monitor and safeguard their
children
from
such
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companion.
For instance
, my elder sister avoids my nephew to play or interact with some of his mates who often use abusive slang
while
playing.
Hence
,
parents
must be accountable for their child's misbehaviour and must take necessary actions to resolve
this
issue.
Furthermore
,
children
learn from their
parents
. It means, if
parents
do not converse respectfully with each other and show mannerless behaviour, the
children
are most likely to be inculcated with the same.
Consequently
, they become
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.
For instance
,
youngsters
being exposed to
a
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frequent domestic violence often behave aggressively with others and do not
hasitate
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hesitate
in indulging themselves in physical disputes.
Hence
, in
certainly
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cases
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a child's nature and behaviour
is
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indeed a consequence of their
parents
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parent's
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behaviour
with
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each other. In conclusion, It is indeed
a
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responsbility
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responsibility
of guardians to provide a
mannerful
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masterful
environment
to
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their
youngones
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young ones
and
procect
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protect
them from negativity as both are the primary factors of
negative
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attitude of
youngsters
.
Hence
,
Parents
are indeed responsible for
thier
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their
children
's bad
behavior
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behaviour
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • upbringing
  • environment
  • instilling
  • moral values
  • discipline
  • influence
  • negate
  • individuality
  • act out
  • external factors
  • peer influence
  • broader societal issues
  • solely
  • community
  • social institutions
  • overly accountable
  • stress
  • unfair blame
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