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What Should students be able to grade their teachers?

#students #grade #teachers
Students
 can evaluate their
teachers
 nowadays. Universities allow
students
 to make it clear
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whether
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teacher
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the teacher
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 is
teching
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teaching
 properly or not. A
well famous
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 term 'visiting faculty' simply means as if
teacher
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the teacher
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 is not delivering his concepts to
students
 he will be no more with the university's job. Making
evaluation
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an evaluation
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 of
teacher
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a teacher
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 gives chance to
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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,
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if any
teacher
 is not properly teaching the subject
although
 one has expertise
on
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 it , to make it
evalute
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evaluate
 so that one improves oneself
for
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apply
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not for
students
 but
also
 for him/herself.
Also
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teachers
 keep aware of the fact if they do not justify their job requirements
their
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 is
knife
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a knife
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 hanging on their neck which could be down on their neck.They do ,in that case, it with more professionally.
On the other hand
,
while
students
 evaluate their mentors , there are lots of chances that they would give
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an evaluation
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 on their
biasness
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biases
 Which
infact
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in fact
 results in more decline
instead
 of improvement of pedagogy by them.Most of
time
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the time
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 , Pupils for sake of fun do give false scaling for their
teachers
 which
not
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is not
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 based on actual scenarios.In that particular situation
instead
 of
improvement
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,improvement
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 there are facets of decline.
Bottom
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 line
,
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is, Teachers
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Teachers
 should be
under
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process
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the process
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 of evaluation
it
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because it
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 increases their ability
of delivering
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 their expertise to
students
 but on
contrary
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the contrary
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 if
marking
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the marking
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 process happens
though
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through
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such
biasness
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biases
 of liking and dislikings it will not help result in decrement rather than
increment
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an increment
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.
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