You are planning a business trip to another city. You will have some free time to do some sight seeing while you are there. Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter explain the purpose of the trip ask about things to do and see in the city invite your friend to do something with you during your visit
Dear
my
friend,
I am writing a letter to let you know Correct pronoun usage
apply
about
I am going to your Correct word choice
that
city
on a business trip.
To begin
with, my company is a study abroad agency in Vancouver, and we are targeting mainly Japanese people. It is a
Correct article usage
apply
significant
to Replace the word
sign
sale
directly to a study institution. My duty Replace the word
sell
of
Change preposition
for
this
business trip is visiting
a study institution Change the verb form
to visit
such
as a college and a university, then
appealing
our company’s service directly.
If you have a suggestion or a recommendation of where should I visit and what should I see Wrong verb form
appeal
at
your Change preposition
in
city
, please let me know.
In addition
, if you have a
time to hang out with me Change the article
apply
while
I am at
your Change preposition
in
city
, it would be more than great!
I would love to visit the most famous restaurant in city
centre with you. It has been published by the vast majority of Add an article
the city
blogger
. I read the review and it says the pasta is amazing Fix the agreement mistake
bloggers
at
there.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,Change preposition
apply
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.