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You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which point in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear
the
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editor, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my disagreements with an article in a national
news paper
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newspaper
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.
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 with, I
am totally agree
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 with your opinion about
a
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the
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 population in
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city
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the city
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centre
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in
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of
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 my country. You mentioned
Tokyo
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 as the
most busy
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busiest
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 and hectic
city
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 and as widely known,
Tokyo
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 is one of the growing population
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city
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cities
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of
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in
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 the world. It getting excessive people in a small
city
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 nowadays. Having said that, I
am totally disagree
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 with your opinion of all
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city
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the city
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centre
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centres
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 in my country look very similar. The town
centre
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 in our country is
quiet
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quite
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different from each other in
a
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various ways. In
Tokyo
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, there are various food that you can enjoy and various
shop
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shops
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 to enjoy some shopping.
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, it is able to have
real
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a real
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 experience of
Nintendo
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a Nintendo
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 Mario cart in
real
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a real
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city
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centre
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 in
Tokyo
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.
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,
Yokohama
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in Yokohama
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 and Chiba, there is nothing like shops and
restaurant
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restaurants
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 in
Tokyo
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.
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, I would love to invite you
to
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too
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Tokyo
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 and have a little tour of the
city
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centre
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in
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apply
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this
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 summer. Looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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