The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table depicts the proportion of individuals that transferred to five regions in a particular period of time 1990 ,1995,2000 and 2005. It is clear from the graph that the number of tours had
significant
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soared in the
last
interval 2005.
According to
what is shown the Middle and Africa illustrated the modest figure of traveller number comparing with other nations
while
,
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in 1990 9.8 and 18.2
million
respectively. when the following years showed a gradual climb for both to get in 2005 15.8 and 28.7
million
visitors respectively.
Therefore
the other area
such
as Europe had the major per cent of visitors in the whole year
the
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400.2
million
tourists in 2005 .After that Asia and
Pacific
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were the second countries after Europe in the traveller ratio ,
hence
80.3 and 117 and 135in the
last
three in 1995 and 2000 and 2005 respectively.
To sum up
, we could say the changes in the total
of
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traveller percentage had been in 2005 rocketed nearly by 250
million
than
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1990.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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