In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today’s world,
understanding
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of reading has changed
last
two decades. With technology, e-reading is becoming more popular because someone believes that societies would get adapt
new
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developments. Nowadays
people
have lots of opportunities
about
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for
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online reading
such
as
newspaper
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newspapers
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, magazines, novels, etc. but old-school methods
are keep
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going like in the past. My humble idea is that both views have correct points and I will talk about both sights’ pros and cons.
To begin
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old-school media has existed for centuries and I think that
people
would like to feel media physically.
For example
, when
people
visit the library, they are becoming more sensible because knowledge and stories just turned physical type.
Moreover
, another beneficial point would be that online newspapers couldn’t replace
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printed
one
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because newspapers are generally sharing significant developments about
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the community
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. That’s why
reader
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readers
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naturally aim to feel the reality of news and they have still done
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thing as same as in the past.
On the other hand
, new technological improvements jumped on the bandwagon and different
kind
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of alternatives are borning with high-tech equipment. As an example
of
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reading tablets new phenomenon for online users and there are lots of benefits for
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the environments
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environments
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environment
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and
comfortability
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. Reading tablets are definitely eco-friends because they are preventing to deforestation of forests.
In addition
, traditional media couldn’t have any flexibility for daily life.
For instance
, reading at night is tiring for
eyes
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the eyes
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because arranging of correct angle cannot
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. Hereby, being environment friendly and comfortable will increase
of
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usage in coming decades.
To sum up
, both views have
advantage
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from their sight and
people
should continue how they prefer to read. I am currently accepting two
side
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of
coin
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and humanity will choose the best way in the near future.
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  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
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  • internet
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