After Staying in a hotel in another city for a week when you got home, you discovered that you had forgotten something of value in the hotel room. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, •Describe the item you forgot and say where you left it •ask hotel to send it to you •Suggest a way to pay for the postage.
Dear Hilton manager
I am David who stayed in
Hilton
hotel in Queenstown Correct article usage
the Hilton
last
week, the
room 323. Since I Correct article usage
apply
backed
to Christchurch, I could not find my watch which is important to me and I am pretty sure it must be left in the room. Verb problem
returned
It
Correct pronoun usage
I
will
be grateful if you Wrong verb form
would
can
do me a Wrong verb form
could
favor
to check the room, my watch is on the desk next to Change the spelling
favour
fireplace
, it is a coffee Add an article
the fireplace
a fireplace
color
band with Change the spelling
colour
round
and dark watch Add an article
the round
a round
which
a laser sign as C6H12O6 on the back. I Correct your spelling
with
will be appreciated
Wrong verb form
would appreciate
if
you Correct pronoun usage
it if
can
find it. Wrong verb form
could
Due to
I do not have any chance to go Queenstown
again, Change preposition
to Queenstown
therefore
, is that possible to send it to me by post to me, I will cover the cost of delivery. There
is my address, 5 Army Correct your spelling
Here
loop
, Christchurch. Thank you for your Capitalize word
Loop
helping
and I am looking forward Replace the word
help
your
reply.
Yours sincerely
DavidChange preposition
to your
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down some of the longer sentences into shorter ones for clarity. For example, you can split: "It will be grateful if you can do me a favor to check the room, my watch is on the desk next to the fireplace, it is a coffee color band with round and dark watch which a laser sign as C6H12O6 on the back."
task achievement
Make sure to correct minor grammatical errors, such as "Since I backed to Christchurch" to "Since I returned to Christchurch."
task achievement
You have provided a detailed description of the item, which helps in identifying it easily.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure and the paragraphs are divided based on different ideas.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.