.Schools are no longer necessary, because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is developing at a surprising speed and is

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the whole way of our life and education.

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that in

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case,

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can learn by themselves at home, I still disagree about

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opinion because even though the

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plays an important role in

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' study,

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education is still indispensable. Admittedly, the

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study a lot, because people from all over the world can share knowledge and ideas here, regardless of geographical restrictions.

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will broaden teenagers' horizons and help them develop in an all-round way. To be more specific, when

students

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on the

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for a problem which they are interested in, they can find not only the situation in

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area

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but

also

in other parts of the world.

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will help them take a more holistic, multi-perspective view of the problem.

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, the role of

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is almost irreplaceable for a student.

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is because the growth of

students

not only needs knowledge learning

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but

also

needs the cultivation of social skills. As

school

is like a tiny society,

students

can learn how to get

along with

others properly and gain valuable friendships in it before entering

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society.

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, schools can provide

students

with a vairy of opportunities to increase

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communication and division of

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among

students

, like

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the youth to make a presentation.

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can result in

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achievement of the purpose of "cooperation", a must master the skill. All in all, we can find out that even in the information era,

school

is actually necessary and should encourage the youth to acquire computer skills to ensure a better future.