The local school would like residents in the area to help maintain the school buildings and the grounds. Write to the school principal. In your letter, say why you want to help explain what help you can offer state when you are available
Dear Sir/Madam,
We came to know from the school authority regarding the need for upkeep of your building and grounds and
hence
, I would like to offer fundraising services and building materials at subsidized prices. It will be a pleasure to help you to the best of our ability.
Firstly
, as you are short of funds, we, as the residents of the colony would like to organise a campaign to raise the money to finance the school's maintenance programme for a year. We are hoping to start that the very next month.
Additionally
, as I am a building contractor I would like to offer the supply of materials at a discounted rate for the repair of your primary classrooms. Hence
please provide me with the appropriate building plans.
For both above suggestions we would like to meet you as early as possible. It will be great if you could make yourself available this
Saturday between 10:00 am and noon.
Yours sincerely,
Kamal SinghSubmitted by Leena Kapoor on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite