some people say that the Government should not put money on building theaters and sports stadium. Others say that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People

have

different

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a different

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point

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points

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of

views

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view

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and different perspectives in

today

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world, some want their

Government

to spend

money

on medical

care

and

education

and some don'

t

want to their

Government

spend

money

on building

theaters

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theatres

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. Medical

care

and

education

are the most important factors in order to develop a

country

's

economy

.

First

, medical

care

give

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people

medicine,

vacine

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vaccine

vaccines

and

also

a healthier body. In specific, without medical

care

,

people

will suffer from diseases which might lead to the fall down of the

country

's population and

economy

.

Additionally

, a

country

's

economy

is important for a developing

country

.

Economy

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helps

government

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the government

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to earn

money

for building new infrastructures, improving

in

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transportation and

help

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their citizens to access

to

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education

.

Population

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is not less important than

economy

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as

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if a

country

's population drop, there will be a lack of starvation in that

country

causing

people

to die after 5 days.

Second,

the lack of

education

has been the most effective problem throughout the world. Without

education

,

people

can'

t

get a job leading to another problem, lack of unemployment. Again, without

job

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,

people

won'

t

have

money

to buy food and

house

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. A bigger problem is that

less

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people

get to work, making the

economy

to

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fall. In short, medical

care

and

education

are

imprortant

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important

and they are problems that the

Governmet

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Government

should

care

about, without these 2 factors, their

economy

can'

t

be develop

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.

Theaters

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Theatres

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and sports

stadium

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stadiums

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are not as important as

medicare

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Medicare

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and

education

so the

athorities

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authorities

shouldn'

t

care

about these factors much.

First

, to support the point of view,

theaters

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are

place

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places

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for

people

to listen to music

as well as

for actors to get more

money

by acting and

sport

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stadium

are

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place

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places

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for

people

play

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sports like football.

However

, building these two places

are

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expensive,

with

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a developing

country

, it will be a huge

disadvantages

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disadvantage

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.

For example

, building a

sport

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stadium

, they need skilled engineers, materials and

money

. Skilled engineers need to be educated

which

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they should take

care

about

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of

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education

first

. Not only

education

but building a

theater

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theatre

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is not safe for

people

, there are chances of accidents in

a

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construction.

On the other hand

, if a

country

can afford medical

care

and

education

, the

Government

should spend

money

on building

theaters

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theatres

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and

sport

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stadiums

as they are places for

people

to relax on their

weekend

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weekends

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.

Therefore

,

people

can reduce their stress when coming to

theaters

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theatres

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and

stadiums

as they can actually listen to music or support their

favorite

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favourite

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team

on

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football. In summary, building

theaters

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theatres

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and sports

stadium

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stadiums

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might cause some harmful

affect

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effect

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to

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the authority and the

country

's

economy

. but if the

country

can afford both health

care

and school,

then

they should build

theaters

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theatres

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and

stadiums

for the citizens. Spending

money

on medical

care

and

education

is

a

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beneficial

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for the

country

's

economy

and spending

money

on building

theaters

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theatres

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and

sport

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sports

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stadiums

bring bother harmful and beneficial effects. In conclusion, the

Government

should

first

care

about medical

care

and

education

before spending

money

on building

the

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theaters

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theatres

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and

stadiums

.