The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables ,sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the
price
of fresh fruits
and vegetables
, sugar and sweets, consumer-price
index and carbonated drinks from 1979 to 2009. The price
of fresh fruits
and vegetables
from 1979 to 1983 increased from about 60 to 100. The price
dropped from about 100 to about 90 in
between 1984 and 1985. It continued rising from 1985 to 2009 and hit a mark of nearly 325. The Change preposition
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price
of fresh fruits
and vegetables
was equal to others but it quickly rose up
from only 90 to 325 making them Change preposition
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to
be the most expensive. Change the verb form
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Next,
the price
of sugar and sweets also
increased from 1979 to between 1981 and 1983. It was the most expensive product when the price
was more than 100, higher than fresh fruits
and vegetables
. It slightly dropped in 1983 and continued to rise again from 1984 to 2009. Next,
the price
of the consumer-price
index was stable, it didn’t drop at any point from 1979 to 2009 but continued to rise slightly. Finally
, the
carbonated drinks have the lowest Correct article usage
apply
price
but it is also
stable, didn’t stop and continued to rise up from 60 to over 150.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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