The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables ,sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables ,sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables ,sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the
price
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of fresh
fruits
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and
vegetables
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, sugar and sweets, consumer-
price
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index and carbonated drinks from 1979 to 2009. The
price
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of fresh
fruits
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and
vegetables
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from 1979 to 1983 increased from about 60 to 100. The
price
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dropped from about 100 to about 90
in
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between 1984 and 1985. It continued rising from 1985 to 2009 and hit a mark of nearly 325. The
price
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of fresh
fruits
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and
vegetables
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was equal to others but it quickly rose
up
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from only 90 to 325 making them
to
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be the most expensive.
Next,
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the
price
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of sugar and sweets
also
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increased from 1979 to between 1981 and 1983. It was the most expensive product when the
price
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was more than 100, higher than fresh
fruits
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and
vegetables
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. It slightly dropped in 1983 and continued to rise again from 1984 to 2009.
Next,
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the
price
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of the consumer-
price
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index was stable, it didn’t drop at any point from 1979 to 2009 but continued to rise slightly.
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,
the
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carbonated drinks have the lowest
price
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but it is
also
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stable, didn’t stop and continued to rise up from 60 to over 150.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, next, ".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 79%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, fruits, vegetables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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