Globalization is creating a world of one culture and destroying national identity. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Modern technology is making the world so predictable by opening the same stores all over the world
such
as Macdonald, KFC, Apple stores, extra. It is claimed by some people that it has a bad impact on national identity
, while
other
have opposing thinking. I totally disagree with the statement and think making the earth one culture is not destroying the specific Correct pronoun usage
others
identity
of a provincial
.
All kinds of stores Replace the word
province
is
opened around the globe to easily access the food, clothes and product that they use in their Change the verb form
are
provincial
. Replace the word
province
This
all kind of stuff is just a daily useable thing rather than a national identity
. There are a lot of things in the world that can not be seen in more than one country that make
it unique. Change the verb form
makes
For example
, pyramid
can only be seen in Egypt and Add an article
the pyramid
Add an article
a statue
the statue
statue
of Liberty is only in America.
Even though the invention of the aeroplane has made it easy to travel that Correct your spelling
Statue
person
around the globe are permanently living in other countries. Fix the agreement mistake
people
However
, they are still making their own community wherever they start to live, it still represents their nationality. In other words
, Brampton is mainly known as a Punjabi community and it still shows that person is living there are from Punjab, India. As the result, the country can represent its identity
in several ways which can not be destroyed by globalization
In conclusion, every provincial
has a unique Replace the word
province
identity
which can be diffracted from other in the things that are only available in some places and by person
that belongs to that place. Modernization can not destroy that by making only a single culture as people are not even ready to forget their culture even though they are living in Add an article
a person
the person
foreign
.Correct article usage
a foreign
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- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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