The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
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The presented diagram depicts the
process
of manufacturing to produce
sugar
from
sugar
cane
. From an
overall
perspective, as can be seen from the
process
,
this
procedure is divided into seven main steps for preparing
sugar
grains.
It is clear that
the
process
of
sugar
manufacturing begins with growing the
sugar
cane
within 12-18 months.
Secondly
, when it comes to harvesting,
this
procedure is separated into two categories: handmade and by machines. Afterwards, the
sugar
cane
is harvested by combining to manufacture juice. Meanwhile, the prepared juice is ready to purify from the limestone filter.
Then
fresh liquor pouring into the evaporator for making syrup through heating. Later on, it is time to separate by centrifuge to remove an excessive amount of
sugar
crystal grains from the syrup.
Then
the liquid comes to the drying and cooling
process
, the prepared syrup plague into the special
cane
, and the
sugar
is ready for people's consumption in the
last
stage.
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