the first chart below shows the number if british vistors to the is and american vistors to the uk from 2011and 2015 . the second cgart show the aniunt spent by those vistors in that periods.

the first chart below shows the number if british vistors to the is and american vistors to the uk from 2011and 2015 . the second cgart show the aniunt spent by those vistors in that periods.
These two bar charts illustrate the travel people from
UK
and US and indicate the expenditure from visitors during the tours from 2011 and 2015.
According to
the first graph, it is apparent that
UK
tourists are always surpassed
than
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Americans. The number of
travelers
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shows a v-shape in the graph, in 2011 and 2015
travelers
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were higher than others, and 2013 was the fewest tourist year, accounting for almost 3
million
UK
visitors. and merely 2.5
million
to the US. 2015 was the peak of people who would like to explore each country, reaching 3.5
million
and 2.5
million
respectively, over 0.5
million
compared to the fewest year. In the second graph,
although
tourist figures represent a v-shape, the expenditure raised significantly. It shows
UK
visitors would like to consume more products than Americans, almost 1.5 times more than US customers. During 2011 and 2015 the expenditure grew 1.5 times from 4 billion to 6 billion.
However
, in turn to America, it went steady at the beginning
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three years, approximately 3
million
, and merely represents a marginal increase in the following two years.
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