Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings. Do you agree or disagree?

People have different perspectives on allowable utility

animals

in medical analysis for satisfaction for human beings.

This

essay disagrees that using

animals

in

a medical studies

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medical studies

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for human benefit is appropriate.

To begin

with, I think that all species' life should be respected

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and that humans have no right to torture

animals

for our own gain;

therefore

, it should be made illegal. Governments should invest in developing alternative methods that can replace using animal experimentation when doing medical analysis.

For example

, nowadays a software program can be developed to model a human immune system and new drugs can be tested in software rather than

animals

.

Furthermore

, sophisticated computer models can be served as an alternative to animal testing. Not only does it produce more reliable results, but it

also

avoids the need for sacrificing

animals

'

live

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.

In addition

to that, the hunting of

animals

for medical analysis can lead to

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the balance in the

ecosystem

. The governments' budgets should be utilized to protect endangered species from the edge of extinction.

For example

,

bear

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the bear

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is often hunted for their gall, which may lead to their extinction.

Besides

, protecting

animals

is the way to balance the natural

ecosystem

on the earth. In conclusion, all

species

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life should be respected, and

that

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humans have no right to

suffer

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suffering

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animals

for our own benefits

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if

hunting

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the hunting

a hunting

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animal can lead to an imbalance in the

ecosystem

animals

for our own benefit

if

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hunting

animals

can lead to an imbalance in the

ecosystem

.