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Opinion Essay, Topic Environment: The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming.To what extent do you agree?

#topic #environment #government #amount #money
In
last
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 few years,
environmental
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the environmental
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 problem has
became
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 a rising concern around the world. Some people
belive
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believe
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 that the government must
spent
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spend
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 more money to tackle the global
warmimg
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warming
problmes
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problems
instead
 of resolving local environmental issues.
However
, I perceive that it should be balanced equally for the betterment of both people and the earth. There are many environmental problems which are being faced by people living in the urban and rural areas which makes the ruling authorities to
resolved
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. one of the
problem
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problems
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 is
the
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apply
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noise pollution which is now really common in the cities
that is
 causing
and
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apply
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disturbing for the animals leaving in surrounding areas.
For example
, one of the
report
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reports
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 conducted by the
animals
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animal's
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 protections
authorites
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authorities
 in India shows that sparrows numbers
has
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have
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 been
droped
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dropped
 drastically in
last
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the last
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 few months and
now
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are now
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 on the verge of depleting. Another reason is the
sevage
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selvedge
savage
service
 line connection to reservoirs which
make
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makes
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 water to be
cotaminated
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contaminated
. Many contractors in urban areas
does
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do
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 not design
the
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drainage systems properly,
Hence
,
government
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the government
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 have to spend
the
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money to advertise and establish agencies to resolve
this
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these
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issues
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. on
ther
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the
 other hand, global warming problems
are
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are also becoming
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also
 became
challanging
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challenging
 for
the
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officials around the world to look after. The main
problems
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problem
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 is
defforestation
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deforestation
. As
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the popullation
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popullation
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population
 is increasing day by day, necessary requirements like houses,
furniture
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and furniture
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 are
also
 increasingly
equally
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equal
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.
This
 has
becomes
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 the main cause of
ozon
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ozone
layers
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 degradation as government do not have any control over
crops
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 protection.
Moreover
, because of mitigating the electricity
requriements
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requirements
 the thermal power plants usage is really high which
realeases
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releases
 the
cardon
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carbon
 into the environment contributing more pollution in the atmosphere.
Therefore
, it is
imporatant
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important
, for
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
 to target
this
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these
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 causes and find alternatives. In conclusion, for the betterment of the earth and living
beings
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 it is really important for the
goverments
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governments
government
 around the world to
spent
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spend
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 the amount equally and wisely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extreme weather patterns
  • biodiversity
  • prioritizing
  • practical measure
  • universal threat
  • resources allocation
  • energy efficiency
  • renewable energy sources
  • deforestation
  • proactive stance
  • international cooperation
  • collective issue
  • transcends national boundaries
  • balanced approach
  • immediate concerns
  • collaborations
  • partnerships
  • non-profit organizations
  • pooling resources
  • effectiveness
  • catalyst for change
  • environmental degradation
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