The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the line chart below compares the
number
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of
shop
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closures and openings in a country over a period of eight years.
it is clear that
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both of the trends of the numbers of
shop
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closures and openings were downward with the obvious/marked fluctuation among the period shown. And there was a sharp fall/drop in 2015 in the
number
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of closed stores. As regarded as the
first,
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the
number
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of the opened store was higher than the closed shops, with the figures close to 8500,
while
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the latter was at approximately 6500. After that, the closed store amount experienced a sudden decline to 4000 in 2012,which was nearly twice as low as before.
However
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, in the following two years, it went up steadily to 6000. At the same time, the figure for
shop
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openings fluctuated slightly between 6000 and 7000 from 2011 to 2014. In 2015, the
number
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of closed shops saw a considerable fall to almost under 1000, followed by a huge increase one year later. Between 2015 and 2018, the opened
shop
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amounts remained relatively stable, at about 4000, but fell to 3000 by 2018.
Likewise
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, in the
last
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three years, the figure for
shop
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closures levelled off at 5000.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shop with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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