The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line chart below compares the
number
of Use synonyms
shop
closures and openings in a country over a period of eight years.
Use synonyms
it is clear that
both of the trends of the numbers of Linking Words
shop
closures and openings were downward with the obvious/marked fluctuation among the period shown. And there was a sharp fall/drop in 2015 in the Use synonyms
number
of closed stores.
As regarded as the Use synonyms
first,
the Linking Words
number
of the opened store was higher than the closed shops, with the figures close to 8500, Use synonyms
while
the latter was at approximately 6500. After that, the closed store amount experienced a sudden decline to 4000
in 2012,which was nearly twice as low as before. Linking Words
However
, in the following two years, it went up steadily to 6000. At the same time, the figure for Linking Words
shop
openings fluctuated slightly between 6000 and 7000 from 2011 to 2014.
In 2015, the Use synonyms
number
of closed shops saw a considerable fall to almost under 1000, followed by a huge increase one year later. Between 2015 and 2018, the opened Use synonyms
shop
amounts remained relatively stable, at about 4000, but fell to 3000 by 2018. Use synonyms
Likewise
, in the Linking Words
last
three years, the figure for Linking Words
shop
closures levelled off at 5000.Use synonyms
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