*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*

*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*
The line graph illustrates the amount of
spread
consumed by Margain,Bowfat reduced spreads and
Butter
in the year between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
,
consumption
of spreads from margarine and
butter
shows a downward trend,
while
bow fat and reduced
spread
experienced an upward trend. In 1981, the
consumption
of
spread
from
butter
was almost 142
grams
,
then
reach its peak in 1986, which was around 160
grams
. After that
consumption
of
spread
from
butter
decreased slightly to 500
grams
.
Furthermore
, the
consumption
of spreads from Margaine was approximately 90
grams
in 1981,
then
decreased to 80 after 5 years. After that, it increased to 100 in 1991. It remains unchanged for 5 years.
Then
occurred a small decrease to 40 in 2007.
Consumption
of spreads from low-fat and reduced spreads was almost 10,which was the lowest in the line graph.At the initial time margarine and
butter
were highest,
however
at the end
of the period low fat outraced them.
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