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Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,more and more people are concerned about educational
certification
,especially parents.They told their children,only a high educational
certification
 can bring them
success
.
While
 other people argued that it is not the only way to justify a
person
 whether he/she is successful in his/her life.
This
 essay will discuss both views and express my favour for the latter idea.
To begin
 with,there are abundant benefits to getting a higher education
certification
.First of all,a
person
 will be more competitive when he/she is looking for a job if he/she graduated from a world-famous university.
For example
,most companies will consider candidates if they have abilities by consulting their resume and a candidate who has higher education
certification
 will get more chances to get hired.
Additionally
,their salaries might be higher than the other employees who have a normal
certification
.
Consequently
,the
person
 who has a higher salary and position in his/her company will be regarded as more successful than his/her peer.
However
,there are numerous cases which indicate educational
certification
 is not a necessity for
success
.Take some celebrities
for example
,Elon Musk,Steven Jobs and Bill Gates,they all dropped out of their study at universities,but they all achieved great
success
 in the world.
Thus
,these demonstrate schools are not the only place to study and educational certifications are not the crucial factors of
success
.
In other words
,if a
person
 has the motivation to acquire knowledge, regardless of where or when he/she can learn from anywhere in our society. In conclusion,
although
 educational certifications are imperative elements in
success
,we should not take them as a priority.Because there are many factors in
success
,
such
 as a
person
’s character,ethics,and integrity.So I agree with the latter view on
this
 topic.
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