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Many people believe formal pen and paper examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examination?

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Nowadays, in every part of the world we live in, the best way to evaluate
people
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ability
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 level is to take examinations, which is taken in ‘pen & paper’
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 in most societies. In
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 regard, some
people
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 believe that the traditional
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 of ‘pen & paper’ examinations
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 no longer an effective
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 for educational evaluation, and it is possible to replace it with more optimal methods. In
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 we will discuss
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the examinations and two different ways of taking
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.
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, the most common way to take an
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 is
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a ‘paper
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 & pen’ examination. In
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exam
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 model, after studying
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a subject, a
person
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 must answer a number of questions about that on paper
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 a certain time. In my opinion, the possibility of error seems to be high in
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, because one can easily cheat in the
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 or even just memorize and answer without learning.
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, a lot of paper is used
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 ‘pen & paper’ exams, which is harmful to the environment. and it
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 takes a lot of time for the corrector to correct all the papers, which seems unnecessary considering the progress of today's world. In the following, another
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 that may be used less to take the
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 is the oral and practical
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. In
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 type of
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, a
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 has to show how much
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 and mastery he has in the subject of the
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, that's why the possibility of cheating in
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 type of
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 is lower and the score that the
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 receives is very close to his level of
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 in that subject.
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,
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 model of taking the
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 requires more attention from the examiner and in some cases costs more because each student is tested separately, and in the practical
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 more resources should be available to the student so that they can perform their abilities well. in conclusion, it is analyzed that taking an
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 is the best way to evaluate
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, but how to take it is very important. In my opinion, taking an oral and practical
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, despite its difficulty and
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cost, can make
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 more capable because It requires more skill and effort,
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 in ‘pen & paper’ exams, it is more likely that the
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's
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 is not equal to his score, that's why the quality is better than quantity.
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