It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should the government place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed?

Nowadays, it is evident that the presence of fast

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is responsible for obesity to some extent

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its low prices. To tackle

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problem, it has been suggested that governments ought to implement a high

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on fast foods to minimise the consumption of convenience

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. I personally believe obesity occurs because of the low prices of fast

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and the government plays a crucial role by increasing the

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and prohibiting the advertisement of fast

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will discourage young people ,especially those who have less money from buying

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at quick service restaurants. The main reason for the high consumption of junk

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is it gives a cheap alternative to healthy

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. A salad

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often is twice as expensive as a burger, resulting in more individuals eating the burger than the salad.

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, more people will prepare fewer

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themselves and eat more mass-produced

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. In my opinion, it should not be possible to sell fast

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at a lower price than staple

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, by making takeaway

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more expensive with the

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imposed by the government than vegetables and fruit, society would change their eating habits, as they would want to save money. A way to reduce the fast

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consumed would be to prohibit its promotion. Commercials of fast

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often target young children by offering inducements,

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as toys in the happy meal at McDonald's

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, children are persuaded to demand a happy meal, not necessarily to eat but to obtain the toy.

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,

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junk

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was consumed by either their parent or their children themselves. If advertising were forbidden, the number of

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consuming fast

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would be reduced and

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the number of obese would decrease as well. In conclusion, governments should put a

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on fast

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and make it more expensive than healthy raw foods, so society would begin to eat more healthily. If advertising were banned, the number of obese people would decrease even more drastically.