Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while other think it is a waste of time. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

in

this

present era,

art

is playing a vital role in shaping the world. even schools have

art

as a

subject

. the argument that

art

is a cardinal discipline for juveniles at institutions is a debate

that is

both agreed upon and disagreed with by many. the two sides of

this

argument are thoroughly analysed and discussed in

this

essay before drawing my opinion. on the one hand, people believe that

art

is

an

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essence of other subjects. even other subjects, whether it is science or mathematics, require a certain knowledge of geometry to draw diagrams.

for instance

, in ,science one needs to make diagrams of many organs in order to complete one's assignments.

thus

, including

art

as a

subject

from primary classes not only

serve

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as

add-on

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to other disciplines but

also

provides children with a chance to be creative in their studies.

on the other hand

, some individuals assert that

art

as a

subject

is waste of

time

because it is a hobby more than a

subject

for teaching. paying much attention to craft will result,

the

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loss of

time

and money for an institute when it can be learned by oneself in their free

time

. To exemplify it, many artists from the past learned the

art

by merely practising on their own and

master

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it.

therefore

, devoting much

time

and expenditure to a

subject

which can be learned by a learner itself is not a wise decision. to summarise, the two sides of the argument concerning the prospect of

art

as an essential

subject

for children at school have strong support.

however

, after a thorough analysis of both sides,

it is clear that

the view of having

art

as a cardinal

subject

for primary students at school has strong support. it is

therefore

predicted that

art

will surely

benefits

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for

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primary school children and its importance will always justify its need, and

hence

it is

crucial

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discipline in an institute.