You have recently been on a vacation in a foreign country and stayed at a home-stay, you have realised that you have misplaced an expensive wristwatch and cannot find it. Write a letter to the family you stayed with. In your letter: Give details of your stay Describe your wristwatch If found how they could return it to you. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .........

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Dear Mr Fenwick, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I cannot locate my costly watch upon returning to my country and most likely I might have left it at home-stay.

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I stayed at your place in Hamilton from 22 December to 2 January 2023, I used a safety box for keeping my valuables. I suspect that I left my Apple Watch 3 with having red colour strap with my initials on it over there. If I don't get my watch, I will lose all data about my past achievements. I would request you to kindly check it once over there and

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enquire about other guests who would have stayed after that. Once you find it, I would request you to pack it appropriately and use a reliable courier service to send it to my home address given during the time of booking. I will be depositing the postal fees directly into your account. I hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Vikas Garg

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

169 words

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