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Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Other say other factors are more important. Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job they really enjoy?

#people #job #love #factors
Many
people
 have been associating happiness with high paid jobs, and
this
 could be a controversial statement.
On the other hand
, others believe that to be happy
people
 need to balance their professional and personal life. I'm not an expert, but I agree
that is
 extremely important for
people
 to balance life satisfaction between the professional and personal areas. Obviously,
people
 usually associate happiness with money or a job, and
this
 is not wrong since it is what they are in search of. Nowadays, belongings are more important than moments, so individuals have been struggling for being professionals recognized, only for driving a good car and living in a wonderful house, no matter if they have no time for family and friends. I'm going to tell you about my experience. I'm a manager and I've worked with
people
 for around ten years, and
accordingly
, to my studies, younger are motivated by things and older for moments. So, what is important to me isn't for others. Still, during my life working as a manager, I hired some engineers, accountants, pharmaceutical, and so to work as sales representatives, and during our journey together they told me that their degrees had been influenced by parents, and when they
further
 became adults they decided to follow another way. To support it, I was an MBA teacher and I participated in many conversations about professionals, and curiously,
this
 is more common than I know, their first degree was influenced by their father and mother. So,
people
 can be realized financially,
otherwise
, they won't be as individuals. To be honest, many students become professionals
such
 as doctors, lawyers and, so to realize their parents' dreams and it has to end up, or will have a sick society in the future. I don't agree with happy in only away. In conclusion, motivation and satisfaction could come from money and high position job, since it is true for those who are looking for it. Honestly, after many wonderful years working with
people
, balance is the best way to be happy.
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