You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sam, Hope

this

letter finds you well. I am Apoorva Badola, the lady you took to the St. Jones hospital on the night of 3rd January. I am writing

this

letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for taking care of me at the hospital

untill

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until

my family arrived. The nurses were kind enough to let me know how you helped throughout the night. I couldn't thank you enough for being there with me during the hospitalization, talking to the doctors and paying for the initial procedures. I appreciate your kindness, and

your

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selflesness

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selflessness

that you showed for a

starnger

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stranger

in need. The way you supported my family after their arrival is beyond amazing. Thank you for finding them and letting them know what

had

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happened. We would like to invite you and your family to a dinner at our house on Saturday evening, i.e. 15th January. We would like to know you better and stay connected as friends. Our address is 154, Anne Street, Toronto. If it is not too

much

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toruble

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trouble

, please accept the invitation and join us for the food. Hoping to hear back from you !

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Yours

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Your

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Yours

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sincerely Apoorva

Submitted by apoorva.badola on Sun Apr 09 2023

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

193 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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