You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sam, Hope
this
letter finds you well. I am Apoorva Badola, the lady you took to the St. Jones hospital on the night of 3rd January. I am writing
this
letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for taking care of me at the hospital
untill
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my family arrived. The nurses were kind enough to let me know how you helped throughout the night. I couldn't thank you enough for being there with me during the hospitalization, talking to the doctors and paying for the initial procedures. I appreciate your kindness, and
your
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selflesness
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selflessness
that you showed for a
starnger
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stranger
in need. The way you supported my family after their arrival is beyond amazing. Thank you for finding them and letting them know what
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happened. We would like to invite you and your family to a dinner at our house on Saturday evening, i.e. 15th January. We would like to know you better and stay connected as friends. Our address is 154, Anne Street, Toronto. If it is not too
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toruble
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trouble
, please accept the invitation and join us for the food. Hoping to hear back from you !
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sincerely Apoorva
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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