A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer.He/she has a ask for your advice. write a letter to your friend,In your letter . explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday . describe some possible disadvantages . say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear friend, I am writing

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camping. I went to camping more than 10 times since I moved to Australia so I can give you a little tip for you.

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with, in my opinion, you can enjoy a camping holiday. As you said before, you love

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nature and you often go

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hiking so

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camping could be the best thing for you to do

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a holiday.

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, you can enjoy not only

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camping

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but

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canoeing and

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swimming

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there. There is

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lake near the camping spot so you can enjoy that.

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, you can enjoy

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cooking

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there. There is a shared kitchen in front of the front desk. You have to buy some groceries but no need to bring a knife or

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board.

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, I would love to go

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camping with you

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summer. If you have

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time to do that, please consider it. Yours sincerely,

Submitted by summer.na.9678 on Sun Apr 09 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

171 words

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