A friend of your is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer.He/she has a ask for your advice. write a letter to your friend,In your letter . explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday . describe some possible disadvantages . say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Hi Sam, How are you? Hope
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letter finds you well. I received the note about your first camping trip. I know you have been super busy with your work, and camping is the best way to
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yourself. The site you selected is perfect for the weather
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amazing hike. I am sure you would love the experience. Since the timing is perfect,
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camping and it may get crowdy. Be prepared to find the right spot and take care of your belongings.
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, since the camp fall under the light-free zone, the organizers do not provide lights, and it gets really dark at night. Make sure you carry enough flashlights with you. I would have loved to join you on
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adventure, but I can't because I am going to India for my sister's wedding. Maybe we can plan another one in September. Have fun and stay safe ! Apoorva
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