Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In

this

globalization era, plenty of

choices

are debatable. On one side, there are some people who believe that statement,

while

others don't.

This

essay will discuss why I agree that we, as a modern society, have too many

choices

. The first and main evidence of having plenty of

choices

is the huge number of advertisement that leads to distraction. It is available

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Television and

also

in

differents

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different

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app

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apps

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in

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our phones.

For example

, when we are searching

a

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watch

in

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our phone. It shows not only in

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the google

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google

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app, but it's spreading to youtube, shopping

app

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apps

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, and even

instagram

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. On top of that, we can't control all the incoming offers.

Thus

, proofing

about

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a huge number

choices

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and

its

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their

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risk

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being distractions. The second evidence of having plenty of

choices

is that we are faced with enough unnecessary

choices

from time to time.

For example

, students now have over one thousand

schools

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accessories.

Such

as rubber, marker, and sticky notes.

However

, those are not

crusial

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crucial

things to decide. But because we have

to

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many

platform

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platforms

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for

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an advertisement

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advertisement

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we are forced to pick one.

Therefore

, it is appropriate to say that nowadays we have beyond

neccesary

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necessary

choices

. On the other

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, people, who especially live in poor countries, face different problems. They don't have many options even for fulfilling their basic needs.

For example

, people in South Sudan North Africa are not able to get access to food, and medical treatment. In conclusion, I strongly agree that all of us have

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many options.

In addition

to that those options

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from benefiting to risking us.