It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days, there is a controversy about whether
people
need inborn
talent
to succeed in art or sports
fields
. Some
people
believe that even though children do not have it, they can be educated as successful
people
.
However
, others firmly believe that it is a must condition to be successful in those
fields
, which is the same view as me. On the one hand, to succeed in those areas, learning patience is more important than having
talent
. There are many
people
who want to take the dominant place, but the chances are a lack.
Thus
, if
people
with natural abilities give up to progress for a long time, they cannot get good results.
For example
, in Korea, shooting an arrow is one of the most popular sports
fields
, with many
talenting
Correct your spelling
talented
talents
children trying it. Most of them,
however
, fail to continue because they should practice in various harsh conditions to maintain their attention.
Nevertheless
, both
people
, who have a natural
talent
or not, try their best to be more competitive. In that case, it is more beneficial for
people
with inborn abilities to succeed faster. Even though those
people
take the same education, individuals having
talent
absorb and utilize something quickly.
For instance
, in art classes, every person learns the same content and is allotted the same time to draw.
However
,
people
who can naturally blend some colours with others make better pictures.
Thus
, a person without natural
talent
must spend more time, difficult to surpass the other with it. In conclusion, some
people
can be successful in those
fields
even though they do not have gifts.
However
, in my opinion, it is undeniable that the public with natural ones is prior to achieving something faster.
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