you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. write a letter to this friend.

Dear Star, I am writing

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you to give my opinion that you should try to get a job. Actually, studying is very important, but I see you are bored when you study.

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, you still don’t determine, what your target is. That’s why it is hard to choose what university or which course will be suitable for you.

In addition

, you are 18 years old

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and live alone so you need to find a stable job to be able to take care of yourself. I know you are stressed but studying is not your priority. You already have knowledge, experience, and a passion for cars so why don’t you try to get a job related to them? When you do something, you like, you will try your best to get a good result. And

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you are satisfied with your efforts. So go ahead and try it. I am extremely looking forward

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reply. Best wishes Bim