you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. write a letter to this friend.
Dear Star,
I am writing
this
letter for
you to give my opinion that you should try to get a job. Actually, studying is very important, but I see you are bored when you study. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, you still don’t determine, what your target is. That’s why it is hard to choose what university or which course will be suitable for you. In addition
, you are 18 years old,
and live alone so you need to find a stable job to be able to take care of yourself. I know you are stressed but studying is not your priority. You already have knowledge, experience, and a passion for cars so why don’t you try to get a job related to them? When you do something, you like, you will try your best to get a good result. And Remove the comma
apply
then
you are satisfied with your efforts. So go ahead and try it. I am extremely looking forward your
reply.
Best wishes
BimChange preposition
to your
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.