Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports faculties . Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

In today's world,

health

is a major concern for

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majority of

population

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the population

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. Some believe that

sports

facilities

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a vital role in improving public

health

.

However

, others believe in multiple factors that can have a beneficial effect on society. I support

this

ideology that many other steps can be taken to improve one's

health

.

To begin

with,

sports

centres

are a motivation for some people. Many individuals enjoy playing

sports

and it becomes a

habbit

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habit

for some. It

enchances

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enhances

their mood and has a positive impact on their mental and

phyical

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physical

health

.

For example

, playing cricket or football can burn calories and improves cardiac

health

by reducing

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cholesterol

level in

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blood stream

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bloodstream

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.

Furthermore

,

sport

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sports

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facilities

provides

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a platform for social interactions. People can

built

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new friendships and it can be a reason for some to utilize game organisations.

On the other hand

, it is not

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only factor that can help in improving

health

. Many other measures can be taken by the government.

Firstly

, public awareness

is plays

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a significant role in

prevention

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the prevention

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of some

diseases

.

This

can be

acheived

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achieved

by involving social media and print media.

For example

, breast cancer is

prevelant

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prevalent

in many areas of the world. Its earlier detection can lead to a better prognosis. Public education regarding early diagnosis and screening of breast cancer has reduced the mortality rate of the disease over the past few years.

Secondly

, making quarantine

centres

for people suffering from air-borne

diseases

such

as

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COVID-19, tb, mumps and influenza virus, can help in preventing

transmission

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the transmission

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of disease.

For example

, during the COVID-19 pandemic,

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these

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centres

helped the government to control

death

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the death

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rate and transmission of the virus. These methods have proved to be helpful for

health

-related issues. I believe that as much as

sport

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sports

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centres

can help increase one's

phyical

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physical

activity, other ways that can benefit a mass population

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should be encouraged more. Projects that can help in public awareness and prevention of

diseases

should be increased.

To conclude

,

health

is an integral part of one's life. Many factors are involved in improving

health

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care systems of the country.

Sports

can be beneficial for some, but programs conducting education plans can be beneficial for many individuals. More money should be spent on

prevention

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the prevention

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of

diseases

.