Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most

people

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believe that the main problem of our environmental issues is the

loss

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of some

species

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of

plants

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and

animals

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.

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this

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might be true, there are some issues which are more important for the environment. There are valid arguments on both sides which I will discuss below.

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, the

loss

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of

species

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of

plants

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and

animals

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could cause unbalanced conditions in nature. There are a lot of

plants

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and

animals

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which are dependent on other

species

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and if one of these

species

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were extinct,

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it would affect the others.

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phenomenon would

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interrupt the food chain in the ecosystem and cause a greater

loss

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of

species

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.

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, the

loss

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of

plants

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and

animals

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would affect the diversity of flora and fauna which could no longer be seen in nature.

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, another environmental problem that we have is the degrading condition of our earth. Air pollution, contaminated water, and soil erosion are some serious problems that have arisen these days. These problems are caused by the lack of responsibility of

people

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toward the environment.

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, global warming

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has alarmed everyone

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this

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condition could cause the rising of sea water

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and flooding in

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.

Consequently

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, many parts of land would be flooded by the sea and lots of lives must move to safer places.

To conclude

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, I think both environmental problems have caused serious effects

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the earth and

people

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have felt the impacts of those conditions. To prevent greater losses and damages,

people

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should work together and start to act immediately

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these issues.