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people are using a lot of online language translation apps .Do the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?

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These days it become easier to communicate with other people from different countries without having to learn about their
languages
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. Indeed, recently more and more people are using
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apps
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 to understand other
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,
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 It may help us to communicate more easily when we are travelling abroad, In my opinion, the drawbacks of
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 development outweigh the benefits. To embark on, with the
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technology
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 in transportation and online booking, it now become much easier for everyone to
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travel anywhere in the world.
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 accent translation
apps
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 might be very handy to use in
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 situation, there are a few downsides to the increasing usage of these
apps
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. First of all, it cause people to avoid learning the
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 of a nation they are about to visit.
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, Learning a new
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 will give us a lot of benefits as we may
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 learn about their culture. In my opinion, trying to learn the
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 of the country we are visiting, means that we respect them.
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, a study has revealed that
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 shapes how we think.
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, understanding a new
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 might give us insights into how they think, and
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 will help us to understand them better.
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, these
apps
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 may cause teachers or
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 instructors to lose their jobs ,especially those who teach foreign
languages
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. In conclusion, despite the benefits offered by these
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 translation
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, I believe that we should
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 and not rely too much on these
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, because understanding a new
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 may help us to understand and respect their culture.
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