There have been many technological developments in the 20th century, for example in transport, telecommunications and health.  What technological development do you think has been the most important? How has it changed people's lives? Have all the changes been positive?

In today's
world
, the development
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science and technology
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made our lives much easier. New discoveries and inventions in the scientific
world
, have a huge impact on
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population. The most beneficial invention of software is "automated intelligence". It has affected most of
young
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generation and has increased
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gap in terms of knowledge.
However
, not all changes have a positive impact on society.
To begin
with, we live in a
computer dominant
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world
where
softwares
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software
have the power to rule
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biggest diplomats.
For example
, the invention of AI software
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to
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diverse development. Automated intelligence is defined as a system that contains all the information in an organised form. Adults, who are working or studying, can benefit from
this
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world
of knowledge.
For instance
, if someone wants to search for a multi-media presentation, he puts a command and AI will solve the query in seconds.
Furthermore
,
such
robotic
softwares
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software
have a major role in educating young people. Individuals from every profession are using
this
software.
For example
, teachers and
proffessors
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professors
are making their lectures
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using the knowledge given by AI and students are making their assignments with
this
encyclopedia. Before
this
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scientific
discovery, people used to spend hours
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finding a solution to a problem.
This
has proved to be the fastest way of delivering solutions and has brought a change in
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brain.
However
, despite all its positive effects, it has made man dependent on
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and has limited his ability to think. It has reduced
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creativity and
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our decision-making capability. I believe it has
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drawback of nullifying human's power of reasoning.
To conclude
, technology has made it possible for us to survive in times of economic and cultural recession. Yet, it has paralyzed
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brain and reduced our mental capacity
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reasoning.
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