It’s more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

It is suggested that school children should learn more about their local

history

instead

of

world

history

. I tend not to agree with

this

view. Admittedly, learning endemic

history

can be beneficial in some respects. For one, it can develop a sense of gratefulness .

This

is mainly because as they know more about their ancestors and

difficulties

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that they faced in the past,

young

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the young

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generation may realize the real value of good living conditions and peace.

As a result

of

this

, they may change their attitude towards everything that they have and may start appreciating them.

For example

, if someone

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enough data about their ancestors who lived during the Great Depression and had to work hard to provide

their

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family, one may be more empathetic , happy and enthusiastic.

On the other hand

, having massive knowledge about

world

history

can bring about some special benefits. First of all, it can broaden one’s horizon, as

world

history

is filled with mysteries, puzzles and intriguing points.

Hence

, learning

it

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gives challenges to one’s mind, leading to

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in a wider way. Take the Second

World

War as an example, details of

this

war

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quite difficult to understand and learning it clearly requires a different way of thinking. In

this

way, people can boost their personal outlook during the learning process. Another aspect is that acquiring knowledge about

history

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of the

world

can offer a chance to avoid past mistakes as

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as possible.

For example

, most issues which we are facing today,

already

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are already

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experienced by ancient people.

Thus

, knowing about these difficulties and what actions the ancient governments took to solve

can

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them can

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let us

to

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escape

such

problems and take effective steps when we confront

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these issues. In conclusion, gathering information about one’s local area can be practical in some respects, yet I believe, the advantages that come from learning

world

history

are worth

to consider

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considering

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and

this

topic is more important than learning local

history