The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
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The
two
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images illustrate the changes of an
island
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for tourism after constructing various facilities.
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, there was no building on the
island
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before.
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, in order to meet the demand of visitors, a lot of constructions have been added for visitors amusing and live nowadays,
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as a restaurant, cabins, and a pier. On the main body of the
island
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, the eastern has basically unchanged, which only increased several trees.
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the other side has built many man-made structures. In detail, there are
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groups of accommodations for visitors resting here, which are distributed as a round by several huts linked by footpath.
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, a vehicle track passes through
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facilities, a restaurant and reception, from the northern to southern located in the middle of
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living areas.
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, differences have been made surrounding the
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. One is the Pier built in front of the reception, which is a harbour for the boat to berth. And the other one is a swimming area divided in the western end for tourists to have entertainment.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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