Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that

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artists

need to be restricted, and not allowed to express

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few contents

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.

while

the other believes that, there should not be any constraint to express his opinion and thoughts. I completely agree with the latter and in

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essay, I will explore my opinion with suitable examples. First and foremost,

artists

can produce

creativity

only through exploring

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ideas and thought

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. If they are restricted in any way, it will directly affect the quality

as well as

creativity

.

For example

, an artist

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is painting the old civilization for an event in a museum. The

artists

can bring

creativity

in the form of dresses the kings used to wear or the designs of the palaces. If the authority decides to order the artist to stick to only one way of dressing style,

then

his

creativity

might be lost and

therefore

it could affect the quality of the painting.

Next,

the

artists

use their art as

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medium of communication to the general public with their unique ideas. In an event like an

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exhibition, children might be able to learn

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events which the

artists

are trying to explain.

For instance

, I learned many interesting stories about lord ganesha in a temple near my home.It has many creative and unique sculptures and they will be sculpted next to each other from the entrance to the exit. Even though some people thought and

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, they are failing to recognize the

creativity

in which it involves.

However

, it is one of the major attractions of the temple and many children are still preferring to visit the temple for

this

art. In conclusion, an artist is at his best, when he has been given full freedom. There are consequences like

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in quality and cannot

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to

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general public.

As a result

, they should be given full freedom to bring joy and could even educate children through it.