In some countries,a few people earn extremely high salaries,some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn Discuss both views and give your opinion

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to be heavily paid,others feel that government should regulate

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and limit the amount people can earn,in my opinion I believe

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salary is necessary. On the one

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some people think that it is okay for

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some

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to be heavily paid and I agree.

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salary is an essential reward for

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and sensitive jobs.the comfort a high salary affords is a strong motivation for

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to strive to

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attain

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offering

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pay and

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positively rubs off on the country

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agree that

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heavy

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create a huge financial gap between citizens in the same society creating an unfair balance which can lead to intimidation.

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can lead to inflation,the percentage earning

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value are usually very small,

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society. In conclusion,

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opinion may vary,I strongly believe the government should pay high

salaries

to some persons