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In some countries,a few people earn extremely high salaries,some people think that this is good for a country while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn Discuss both views and give your opinion

#countries #people #salaries #country #government #control #limit #amount
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 some people think that it is okay for some
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 to be heavily paid,others feel that government should regulate
salaries
 and limit the amount people can earn,in my opinion I believe
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 salary is necessary. On the one
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 some people think that it is okay for
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some
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 to be heavily paid and I agree.
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 salary is an essential reward for
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 and sensitive jobs.the comfort a high salary affords is a strong motivation for
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 to strive to
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attain
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 offering
such
 pay and
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 positively rubs off on the country
On the other hand
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 agree that
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 heavy
salaries
 create a huge financial gap between citizens in the same society creating an unfair balance which can lead to intimidation.
Although
 high
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 can lead to inflation,the percentage earning
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such
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society. In conclusion,
while
 opinion may vary,I strongly believe the government should pay high
salaries
 to some persons
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