The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
The charts
represents
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the
number
of
tourist's
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tourist
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visits in the
last
7 years. It covers
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the
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span between 2010 to 2017. It includes 2 types of
visitors
and the total
number
of visits
such
as
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
,
visitors
staying on the
island
and the total
number
of
visiting
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visitors
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.
Overall
,
total
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a total
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number
of
visitors
were
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the highest in 2017
in contrast
to
visitors
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the visitors
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staying on
cruise
ships
were
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was
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the lowest
number
in the same year.
To begin
with, both
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
and
visitors
staying on
island
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the island
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were
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scored 1.5 million in 2012 and 2013
consequently
.
In addition
,
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a
the
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number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
were staying constant
in
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2013
till
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to
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2015. On top of that,
total
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a total
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number
of
visitors
were
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was
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increasing gradually in the mentioned years. In 2011,
visitors
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the visitors
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staying on
island
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the island
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was double
visitors
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the visitors
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staying on
cruise
ships
.
Besides
, both
visitors
staying on
island
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the island
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and
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships
were
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hit 1.5 million in 2015 and 2016
subsequently
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, cruise, ships, island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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