The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
The charts span between 2010 to 2017. It includes 2 types of
represents
the Change the verb form
represent
number
of tourist's
visits in the Change noun form
tourist
last
7 years. It coversCorrect article usage
the
visitors
and the total number
of visits such
as visitors
staying on cruise
ships
, visitors
staying on the island
and the total number
of visiting
.
Replace the word
visitors
Overall
, total
Change the article
a total
the total
number
of visitors
were
the highest in 2017 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in contrast
to visitors
staying on Correct article usage
the visitors
cruise
ships
were
the lowest Correct subject-verb agreement
was
number
in the same year.
To begin
with, both visitors
staying on cruise
ships
and visitors
staying on island
Add an article
the island
were
scored 1.5 million in 2012 and 2013 Unnecessary verb
apply
consequently
. In addition
,Change the article
a
the
number
of visitors
staying on the island
were staying constant in
2013 Change preposition
from
till
2015.
On top of that, Change preposition
to
total
Change the article
a total
the total
number
of visitors
were
increasing gradually in the mentioned years. In 2011, Change the verb form
was
visitors
staying on Correct article usage
the visitors
island
was double Add an article
the island
visitors
staying on Correct article usage
the visitors
cruise
ships
. Besides
, both visitors
staying on island
and Add an article
the island
visitors
staying on cruise
ships
were
hit 1.5 million in 2015 and 2016 Unnecessary verb
apply
subsequently
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, cruise, ships, island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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