Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language Is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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learned by others to travel or work in another country, Other
people
believe that
this
reason can not be the only purpose of learning foreign
languages
.
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different perspectives of foreign
language
learners. From my point of view, understanding and learning new
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languages
and cultures improve
people
's demands and horizons. First and foremost, interest in
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definitely improves the mental capacity of individuals. It provides increased memory and improved personality. These are not only provided by studying the new
language
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but,
also
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both
languages
at the same time.
For instance
, regularly learning new vocabulary from a different
language
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signal transmission between brain neurons. Because of that bilingual children's memory and personality improve faster than monolingual children. I believe, a person who is bilingual, can easily improve their chess skills in
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short term. One of
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my friends, Ozan,
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showed me
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how he can predict
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future
movements easily with
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. He
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to speak more than 3
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languages
at the age of 14.
On the other hand
, some
people
consider
to learn
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new
languages
for
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vacations
and business.
Moreover
, learning
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languages
for
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vacations
vaccinations
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misleading their precious time. Many famous countries' service sector employees already know lots of different
languages
.
For instance
, In France, If foreigners try to order a meal in French, most of the
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personals
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interrupt their conversations and start to talk with them in their
languages
.
Nevertheless
,
this
negative attitude isn't developed to disappoint
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. The same situation can
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in a different way
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sector. Important holdings already have their translators. In conclusion, some individuals accept that the main reason for learning a new
language
is
due to
travel or work
to
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related
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country. Other individuals
not
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agree
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this
idea and believe that there are other beneficial factors
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a role
to
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learning new
languages
.
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