It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you thing the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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living creature, human needs to improve many aspects of their lives to become

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better person. To accomplish

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pursuit, some risky actions or decisions are needed, especially in career and personal

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. I believe that taking those

risks

would bring more

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drawbacks. In

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environment, people might encounter some opportunities that are essential for their career path in the future. It is believed that the opportunity does not only provide a promising outcome, but it

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comes with many challenges and threats.

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, people will not grow if they never try and make mistakes. To take junior accounting as an example, when they are assigned to make an annual financial report, there is a possibility that they will make a mistake during the process. Despite the potential failure, the

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will always win because if they could finish the task successfully, it will be a good mark for them,

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they could learn from their mistake.

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, taking

risks

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pivotal in

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life. The fact that life is not easy has triggered people to evolve and keep growing. If they do not take some actions because they are afraid

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the consequences, they would not accomplish some functions in their developmental stage.

For instance

, when babies learn to walk, they know that the process of learning might be painful.

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, they still do that anyway because they know that the results of the process will be very rewarding. That

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human perceives

risks

for their entire lives.

To sum up

, it is true that

risks

provide two opposing outcomes whether it is

favorable

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or painful.

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, if we look

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in a larger scope, both two outcomes still give valuable

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for human growth either professionally or personally.

Therefore

, no matter how big the disadvantages might cause, the advantages of taking

risks

are always superior.