Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays,

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society believes that many

children

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spent most of their

time

in a day using phones,

either

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whether

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it is smartphones or androids.

This

phenomenon happens probably because of

lack

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the lack

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of

parents'

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parents

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invigilation and less of outdoor activities

provide

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by

school

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. Personally, I think

this

issue brings

negative

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more negative

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development than positive

one

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ones

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dealing with

children

's

characters

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building and health

problem

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problems

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. First and foremost, most youngsters spend a great deal

time

of

their

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playing with smartphones because

parents

give little

toward

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them. These

parents

probably spent their

day

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days

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work

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working

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hard to earn money and

forget

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to nurture their

children

. Take as an example, many

parents

who work in urban areas will leave their

children

without invigilation

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home and free them to access

internet

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the internet

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.

This

then

lead

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leads

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the

children

to access

netflix

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for finding

some

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interesting movies, or

event

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even

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worst

lead

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leads

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them t access porn movies. another reason can be there is little

extracurricular

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extracurriculars

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provide

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provided

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by the learning institution which let

children

to

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have more interaction with their friends. When the

time

comes to go back home,

this

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these

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children

will

confuse

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be confused

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of

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about

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what activities they shall do

in

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home.

while

they are still underage and have no permission from

parents

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their parents

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to go outside.

this

problem will lead

this youngster

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these youngsters

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to make agreements with

the

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friends to spend their

time

playing mobile games

such

as

,

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Free Fire, PUBG, mobile legends, and so on.

Consequently

, they will

spent

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the entire day

to play

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games and

communicate

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communicating

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with friends through mobiles. In my opinion,

this

issue leads to negative improvement

for

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children

's

growing

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especially

for

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their character development. If

this

phenomenon continuously

happen

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happens

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, it may

causes

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cause

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the

children

will grow to become an introvert. They will find it convenient to socialise through mobiles and avoid

to have

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having

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interactions with other people.

This

problem

then

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will

also

cause a few dangerous diseases suffered by

children

such

as early stroke because of radiation resulting from

phones

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usage.

To sum up

, I believe that youngsters

shall

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not

spent

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spend

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days only

to interact

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interacting

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through smartphones, neither playing games, watching movies or

othe

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other

activities. If

this

activity

continue

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continues

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to happen,

then

it will

give

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negative

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a negative

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impact

to

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children

's growth and their health issue.