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Many young people regularly change their job over the years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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No doubt that work is our essential need to accomplish our desires but nowadays, the young generation is changing their
jobs
 after a few times and they
change
jobs
 because of many reasons. I believe that
this
 trend has many advantages and disadvantages. I will discuss my viewpoints with suitable examples and a conclusion in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, sometimes
youngsters
 do their
jobs
 for a long time but
companies
 do not offer them a good salary owing to
this
 fact, they think to leave their previous
job
 and they try to find work in another organization
as a result
, juveniles feel satisfied with their new
job
 and salary and they leave the previous
job
.
Moreover
, some young ones want to explore more knowledge and they join new
companies
 so that they can learn about different cultures and masses
as well as
,
youngsters
 can get more promotion in those organizations. To cite an example, young people
change
 their
jobs
 because they feel discrimination at their workplace that could be related to promotions, offers and so on and it
also
 becomes the reason to modify their
jobs
.
Furthermore
, transportation
also
 play role in the masses changing
change
 their
jobs
 because sometimes some
job
 locations are very far and they want to get
jobs
 near their homes so that
youngsters
 can save their commute time and they can utilize that time for other tasks.
In addition
 to it, sometimes
youngsters
 want to get benefits
such
 as medical, pensions and paid sick days but their older
companies
 do not offer these kinds of services so they join new
companies
 to grasp their services. To recapitulate, if all
companies
 provide adequate benefits to their employees
then
 people will not
change
 their
jobs
 and they will work for their whole life in one sector.
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