the pie charts below show the devices that people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in canada in two different years.
The given pie charts illustrate information about the benefit of six devices for watching
television
by adolescents to adults (18 to 25 age group) in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
In accordance with the data, the use
of Conventional Tv
for watching television
programs in 2009 was higher than in 2019. It was shown dramatically decreased from 34 % (2009) to 4 % (2019), and the gap between both years was 30%. In addition
, the same trend also
happened to laptop and desktop computers which considerably declined from 20 % to 12 % and 18 % to 12 % respectively. There were gaps between both years : 8 % for laptops and 6 % for desktop computers.
In contrast
, some devices presented another trend. Firstly
, the use
of flat tv
screens for watching tv
by Canadians was extremely increased from 2009 to 2019 with percentages of 8% to 27 %. It was an increase of 19 %. Secondly
, the use
of tablets also
rose by 14 % from 2009 to 2019 with a detailed proportion of 5 % to 19 %. Lastly
,the use
of mobile phones for watching Tv
depicted the same trend with flat tv
screens and tablets with a ratio from 15 % to 26 % (2009 to 2019). It was shown that there was an increase of 11 % from that device,
Overall
, in 2019 Canadians tend to use
Flat Tv
screens for watching television
more than conventional Tv
. Furthermore
, they love to use
tablets and mobile phones for doing that activity. While
they were not interested in watching television
using laptops and desktop computers as they did in 2009.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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