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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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With the rise of the
Internet
, the demand for newspapers will decrease and no one will spend money
while
 purchasing records and magazines because
due to
 modern technology, everything is available on the
Internet
. I partly agree with the statement online reading saves money
as well as
 hour and you can carry a wide variety of
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 everywhere in the form of pdf. I will exclude my agreement points in the forthcoming paragraph. To commence with, in
this
 modern era, where
Internet
 privilege in households makes human lives easier. To epitome, nowadays most students used social apps in studied and get a lot of information about the subjects within a limited time period and free of cost. To add on, students get depressed and feel uneasy
while
 carrying bags with
huge
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bill
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bills
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 and they waste
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a moment
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moment
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moments
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while
 finding the answers and questions. But online all data are at your fingertips can download
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the report
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report
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 in
the
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soft form on smart gadgets and take them anywhere and read in pleasure moments .
Furthermore
, nowadays most of the public prefers to watch the news on TV and mobile with families it saves their time and updates them in shore time
whereas
, spending 1 hour spent on reading.
On the other hand
, people disagree because excessive use of online searching makes individuals
introverts
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used the
Internet
 not only for constructive purposes and indulge for vulgar websites. They lost their precious contact
as well as
 became mentally and physically weak. Reading online causes eyes infections as well eye side weak. To summarise, excessive use of
the
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Internet
 newspapers will reduce their identity so governments should invest money in newspapers to make them attractive to the youth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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