The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart indicates the number of overseas tourists who have been to different regions in European countries, including the
coast
, mountains,
as well as
lakes, between 1987 and 2007.
Overall
, the population of foreigners in surveyed nations displayed an upward trend, despite that the number of the lacks experienced a significant drop.
On the other hand
, the
coast
was the most favoured tourist spot, compared to the mountains which was the least popular place for overseas visitors. The population of foreigners in the lakes continued to increase to over 70
thousand
in 2002, surpassing the data of the
coast
in the same year and becoming the most favoured place to visit by overseas individuals.
However
, the number dropped drastically after 2002 to 50
thousand
in 2007. International tourists on the
coast
accounted for the largest proportion among other regions, the figure went up 30
thousand
within 20 years to exceeding 70
thousand
in 2007.
In addition
, the incremental population of visitors
also
Add a missing verb
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displayed in the mountain areas, even though it was considered the least popular type of region since 1992, visitors went up from 20
thousand
to 35
thousand
between 1987 and 2007.
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  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
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